I can barely hear his cry

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Hear that lonely guitar tune
it sounds so low tonight
that music man he sings so low
I can barely hear his cry

I’ve never known a sadder sound
than the one I hear tonight
like moon light on a newborn wound
in a child too young to cry

have you ever seen an empty room
where love forgets to shine
that guitar man is leaving soon
I can hear him say goodbye

the gentle weeping lonesome gloom
cuts through a moonlit night
and as he plays his final tune
I can barely hear his cry ©

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16 thoughts on “I can barely hear his cry

  1. shama38 says:

    I know a man with a guitar
    that gently weeps this way..
    Love this! 🙂

    • If he’s anything like me, all it takes is a sweet heart to talk to. If he doesn’t bite… go lend him an ear 😊 a women holds the answer to the dark questions in every mans heart. God bless you and thank you!

  2. shama38 says:

    Hmmmm…I try all the time! 🙂 thanks for the advice my friend.

  3. ἇRVℎℰℰ says:

    Strumming, plucking,
    Strings playing,
    Wounded song
    Tightly composing
    His unseen tears dripping.

    This poem truly opens doors =)

  4. techwizer says:

    brilliant man..awesome stuff

  5. rjl2727 says:

    ok. this is really, really good!!

  6. Delightful contrast ,sad,yet the words touche the heart.Jalal

  7. akash says:

    Beautifully written and vivid

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